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Post by Daniel on Mar 28, 2013 15:24:06 GMT 1
OK I'm uploading a sample now. You can listen and say what I can do better and what's good  This is NOT the final version! I may need a couple of days to find the perfect one  I deleted the first song and did a whole new one (it's much better  |
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Post by Daniel on Mar 28, 2013 15:51:58 GMT 1
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Post by Daniel on Mar 28, 2013 15:54:11 GMT 1
There will be more than the Guitar in the final version. This is just a sample for the melody!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 28, 2013 15:57:09 GMT 1
Estonian!!!
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Post by Rick on Mar 28, 2013 17:22:10 GMT 1
Nice song!  If you are trying to improve it: - After you had this song totally in your head, you could try to make the chords harder to play where you can, or to be more incisive in the chorus part. How? Start slowly, and in the middle you can add sus7 or sus9 to the chords, but that's just an idea
- In the beginning chorus, just start to arpeggiate the chords ;D
- In the chorus, but also in the rest of the song, just find some keys that can be duplicate or to play the first key of a chord to a lower part of the keyboard ;D
This song is similar to what I've learnt just today at the Piano lesson  ;D I'm not a good songwriter.. if you can tell me about what is the song for (love, random etc. ), I'll try ;D |
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Post by Daniel on Mar 28, 2013 17:38:58 GMT 1
Nice song! If you are trying to improve it: - After you had this song totally in your head, you could try to make the chords harder to play where you can, or to be more incisive in the chorus part. How? Start slowly, and in the middle you can add sus7 or sus9 to the chords, but that's just an idea
- In the beginning chorus, just start to arpeggiate the chords ;D
- In the chorus, but also in the rest of the song, just find some keys that can be duplicate or to play the first key of a chord to a lower part of the keyboard ;D
This song is similar to what I've learnt just today at the Piano lesson ;D I'm not a good songwriter.. if you can tell me about what is the song for (love, random etc. ), I'll try ;D This is just a sample for you, to know what the melody is like  Thanks for the tips ;D I can't go to my piano lessons anymore because of my school -.- |
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Post by How Bogs How Blue on Mar 28, 2013 18:00:21 GMT 1
"I still don't know" by the D&B ;D Chorus: (in Romanian) Dar inca nu stiu De ce ai plecat Chiar daca nu stiu Eu iti voi afla Toata taina --------------------- (In English) But I still don't know Why you have left Even if I don't know I will surely learn All those secrets It's just in 1st think. I'm a good song-writer. Last year, I tryed for  Moldova in JESC  |
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Post by Dimitris on Mar 28, 2013 21:55:55 GMT 1
For the chorus (it's not very good but whatever ) I still believe That I can live Without you by my side I still hope That I'll survive Without you next to me |
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Post by Rick on Mar 28, 2013 23:01:15 GMT 1
 Isegi kui see haiget teeb, Isegi kui ma olin veel nutma, Õppisin, et elu läheb edasi
 Even if it hurts, Even if yet (still) I cry I've learnt.. that anyway, life goes on. ;D |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 28, 2013 23:03:41 GMT 1
Myslím, že som blázon, som blázon ... ja som jedol všetky koláče Urobili mi slintať.
Ak chcete si, že som slabá, pre chuť pečiva.
Jedlo je skvelé, je to oh tak chutné.
Ale tak, ja som blázon.
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