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Post by αndreas on Oct 7, 2014 16:50:51 GMT 1
Thank you all for the positive reactions and thank you for being honest about the negative parts of the song. Last year really EVERYONE said that my song is amazing and I didn't know the bad parts of the song until that French site analyzed it. Now I know at least that it is not perfect I hope I can make it anyway Can you send me the link to the last year's entry?
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Post by Anesović on Oct 7, 2014 16:51:20 GMT 1
Exept the baby mobile sound in the beginning, the song is really calm. Not way to calm, not to rocky. I really like it Together with Kitty and Kate, this is one of my favorites so far. I wish you luck Daniel
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Post by Daniel on Oct 7, 2014 16:52:59 GMT 1
Thank you all for the positive reactions and thank you for being honest about the negative parts of the song. Last year really EVERYONE said that my song is amazing and I didn't know the bad parts of the song until that French site analyzed it. Now I know at least that it is not perfect I hope I can make it anyway Can you send me the link to the last year's entry? Here you can listen how the song sounds the same the whole time www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XhbQ-Q4FS4I hate it
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Post by Logan on Oct 7, 2014 16:54:45 GMT 1
Thank you all for the positive reactions and thank you for being honest about the negative parts of the song. Last year really EVERYONE said that my song is amazing and I didn't know the bad parts of the song until that French site analyzed it. Now I know at least that it is not perfect I hope I can make it anyway If you make it then they might help you improve it.
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Post by Rick on Oct 7, 2014 16:56:49 GMT 1
It's the fourth time I'm listening to it Advices for improving (if you still don't mind changing something there and there ): -Amazing intro- 0:30 - Remove the guitar and add a cool drum like rolling and then you go with the beat through the song. 0:49 - Drum intro for the chrous 0:49 - Change type of guitar to an "higher" one (?) 1:09 - That beat is catchy and I really like it, but if you manage to make an epic drum rythm from 0:30 go on with that Or with both but idk how it would sound then 1:28 - Same advice from the first chorus 1:44 - From "foooor" to "I know..." could you make some kind of sound transition like some violin sounds going down in a scale? Idk if this makes sense So that space doesn't sound plain. Same goes for 1:54. 2:06 - I'd add another instrument there so that it's different from the verses and chorus, so you could either put continuous violin strings or some acoustic guitar sounds (played often, not 1/4 but 1/2 or so - Maybe with some kind of rythm ) 2:25 - I miss the drums intro there tho Last chorus - Go with electric guitar, drums and whatever else - As long as it's not charged too much lol I have an earworm already
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Post by Anesović on Oct 7, 2014 16:57:23 GMT 1
If I am gonna be honest, Keep On Walking wasn't really a great song for me. You'd still have my support tho Hope Lonely Streets will do good btw: didn't you say that you had two songs for the swiss selection?
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Post by Daniel on Oct 7, 2014 16:58:43 GMT 1
Thank you all for the positive reactions and thank you for being honest about the negative parts of the song. Last year really EVERYONE said that my song is amazing and I didn't know the bad parts of the song until that French site analyzed it. Now I know at least that it is not perfect I hope I can make it anyway If you make it then they might help you improve it. That was my intention I can't leave it as it is right now. I need real instruments and higher recording quality
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Post by Mordecai on Oct 7, 2014 16:59:53 GMT 1
Daniel Oh my, you have inspired me to write a song..... You should be proud, I am hardly motivated
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Post by Anesović on Oct 7, 2014 17:00:20 GMT 1
and another thing: Not to sound way to changy, the song is already good. But. I would love if the tempo of the song gets higher and higher for every ref in the song. Just a suggestion
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Post by Daniel on Oct 7, 2014 17:01:16 GMT 1
I already uploaded it to the Swiss Page now Is there a way to remove it and remix it?
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