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Post by Daniel on Oct 7, 2014 17:03:23 GMT 1
btw: didn't you say that you had two songs for the swiss selection? I didn't have enough time  |
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Post by Rick on Oct 7, 2014 17:03:28 GMT 1
I already uploaded it to the Swiss Page now  Is there a way to remove it and remix it?  Nevermind These were suggestions only  But you could make a test and see how it works and then post it here and so on  You still have two weeks or so, so it isn't like you have to do everything until tonight |
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Post by Phil on Oct 7, 2014 18:15:21 GMT 1
So, I just listened to the song. My honest opinion: Well first of all, Daniel your voice is just OMG WTF. I wish I could just sing as good as you do… you could earn success in charts with your singing abilities, congrats !  About the melody… some parts are really good But I think the comments made by Rick and some others were very relevant: you should make the chorus stand out a little more, with a drum or something like that. It has a lot of potential, but it needs some LITTLE improvements to become perfect Btw, this kind of song could do very well at ESC  |
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Post by Anton on Oct 7, 2014 18:39:35 GMT 1
now, my turn Daniel I like the song very much, the melody stays in your mind and it's catchy. Sometimes I wish that I could also be as creative as you so I can write my own songs. ._.' And the melody in the background sounds familiar to me...  What I missed in the song (personally) is that "wow"-moment in the chorus where everyone should get goosebumps (or idk how "Gänsehaut" is in English...). Also the melody to the song (I mean what you are singing in the song) is kind of boring (don't take it personal  ). I would have suggested to you that you try to extend your ambitus (  Tonumfang), especially in the chorus. But I should forget to mention that your voice is just unique  I personally sing in my freetime too, but I really don't think that it sounds as good as you made it. However, I hope you have very much success and good luck! |
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Post by Franck on Oct 7, 2014 18:46:26 GMT 1
First page updated! I tried everything to leave the same chance to all of them! ovsc.proboards.com/thread/11875/switzerland-eurovision-song-contest-2015btw Daniel I'm telling you what i think about your entry : What I don't like : • It's better than "Keep on walking" but I found the same thing that disturbed me with that song : I can't clearly hear a difference between the verses and the chorus. It makes the song very regular, maybe too much imo, but that's the only bitchy thing I'll say about your song! What I like : • You can definitely sing, you're not the new Adele but I it seems quite easy for you to sing, and I am sure that you would be good live! • This song is very well-written (the level is higher than "Bombo") • The instrumental is simple but it works quite well with your voice, you create a nice universe! What I noticed : • You re-used the NVSC postcards piano didn't you? Globally : Your song is good but I'm afraid I'm the only one that think it should win. I will of course support you because it's YOUR song because between us it's Le Baguette for ever and because I would feel like a traitor if I did not do so just because your song is not my favourite! I'm 100% with you Daniel! |
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Post by Phil on Oct 7, 2014 18:52:34 GMT 1
I'm 100% with you Daniel! is with him |
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Post by George on Oct 7, 2014 19:02:40 GMT 1
Well,it's better than your previous song,but it's meh  (Sorry :/ ._. ) I like the music and your voice but only this |
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Post by Daniel on Oct 7, 2014 19:03:53 GMT 1
I really love you all, you are amazing Only criticism can help you to get better, so thank you so much for being honest. You don't need to feel sorry at all I'm not professional (yet  ) so I think these faults are acceptable but I can always improve with your comments! It is nice to hear that my voice is not the major problem  |
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Post by Franck on Oct 7, 2014 19:06:10 GMT 1
I really love you all, you are amazing Only criticism can help you to get better, so thank you so much for being honest. You don't need to feel sorry at all I'm not professional (yet ) so I think these faults are acceptable but I can always improve with your comments! It is nice to hear that my voice is not the major problem Now you need a videoclip! |
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Post by Phil on Oct 7, 2014 19:07:25 GMT 1
I really love you all, you are amazing Only criticism can help you to get better, so thank you so much for being honest. You don't need to feel sorry at all I'm not professional (yet ) so I think these faults are acceptable but I can always improve with your comments! It is nice to hear that my voice is not the major problem Now you need a videoclip! Just let him use the clip of  You can touch my Boobies. |
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(Sorry :/ ._. ) I like the music and your voice but only this 
) so I think these faults are acceptable